https://www.birdsasart-blog.com/baa/2011/11/09/for-your-critique-image-15/ The blog of bird photographer Arthur Morris Sun, 11 Dec 2011 16:51:42 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8 https://www.birdsasart-blog.com/baa/2011/11/09/for-your-critique-image-15/comment-page-1/#comment-122921 Thu, 10 Nov 2011 21:58:49 +0000 http://www.birdsasart-blog.com/?p=7475#comment-122921 It’s a super duper image! The interaction between them is lovely. But is there some over exposure, the whole thing seems slightly washed out.

]]> https://www.birdsasart-blog.com/baa/2011/11/09/for-your-critique-image-15/comment-page-1/#comment-122539 Thu, 10 Nov 2011 02:02:35 +0000 http://www.birdsasart-blog.com/?p=7475#comment-122539 Superb composition. I like it that the bears are paying attention to each other, as it strengthens the composition. I would increase the saturation and maybe the contrast a little, and like DP I’d consider darkening it a little after assessing the saturation and contrast. A little vignetting might be nice to manage the brightness of the large grassy areas at the top of the image. This image might do really well as a black & white, if the saturation adjustments didn’t succeed in making the colors an important part of the image.

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