https://www.birdsasart-blog.com/baa/2011/11/16/for-your-critique-image-17/ The blog of bird photographer Arthur Morris Sun, 11 Dec 2011 16:53:23 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.8.3 https://www.birdsasart-blog.com/baa/2011/11/16/for-your-critique-image-17/comment-page-1/#comment-133774 Mon, 28 Nov 2011 13:20:23 +0000 http://www.birdsasart-blog.com/?p=7577#comment-133774 This comp shows the water movement created by the birds and the direction of movement. Also if you moved the birds to the right you would cut off the water feature.This comp also focus my eyes immediately on the birds and then I am drawn to the right along the water trail.

]]> https://www.birdsasart-blog.com/baa/2011/11/16/for-your-critique-image-17/comment-page-1/#comment-127603 Sat, 19 Nov 2011 12:16:37 +0000 http://www.birdsasart-blog.com/?p=7577#comment-127603 I can’t see any reason to change the position of the birds. The wave flow seems to fall from the right on down, which puts the birds in the lower left. I personally don’t get the notion that moving objects need to have a place to move to. No they don’t. That can be left to the imagination. And having movement towards the edge of the frame actually creates a sense that something is moving, particularly in a shot like this where a fast shutter speed has been used in order to freeze the actual movement.

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