Background too busy for you? « Arthur Morris/BIRDS AS ART

Background too busy for you?

What’s Up?

On Thursday morning I photographed and videoed the bar mitzvah rehearsal of my grandnephew, Max Weinstein. I attended the bar mitzvah on Saturday morning but the use of any electronic devices in the temple is forbidden on the Sabbath. But I did grab nearly a thousand canid images of the family and guests at the big party afterwards. I will share some of those with you here at some point.

I fly back home this afternoon to get ready for our red-eye flight to Santiago, Chile on Wednesday. Denise and I are doing a few days with the condors in Santiago, then a week-long land-based Falklands trip, that followed by the great South Georgia adventure with the Cheesemans. Then home for three whole days before heading to Bosque. How is that for slowing down?


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This image was created on last year’s San Diego IPT with the hand held Canon EF 100-400mm f/4.5-5.6L IS II USM lens and the rugged Canon EOS-1D X. ISO 400. Evaluative metering -1/3 stop: 1/2500 sec. at f/5.6.

One AF point down and three to the left of the center AF point (Manual selection)/AI Servo Expand/Rear Focus AF as framed was active at the moment of exposure (as is always best when hand holding). The active AF point was just in front of and below the bird’s eye. Four to the left of the center AF point would have placed the active AF point squarely on the bird’s eye. Nonetheless as you can see below the bird’s eye is razor sharp. Click here to see the latest version of the Rear Focus Tutorial. Click on the image to see a larger version.

Brown Pelican and friends in background

Like it or not? Why?

Is the background too busy? Or does the beauty of the subject carry the image?

Could I have gotten significantly lower here?

The answer is “no.” Leave a comment and let us know why not.

What Would You Do?

If you decided to try and improve the background in Photoshop, how would you attempt it?

100-400 II

The pelicans are so tame an hour after sun-up that the Canon EF 100-400mm II is deadly on the cliffs at LaJolla, even when used with a full frame camera body. The birds are, however, quite skittish early on so you must take great care approaching them before 8:30am.

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Eye Doctor Work

After converting the RAW file in DPP I brought the image into Photoshop. As you can see in the animated GIF above the eye was a bit funky in the original. The bird was looking up and the lower right part of the pupil was not very well defined. First I repaired the pupil with the Clone Stamp Tool and then a series of small warped Quick Masks that were refined with Regular Layer Masks. Once the pupil was made whole I painted a Quick Mask of the pupil being sure to include lots of the white iris above so that after I placed the pupil on its own layer it was easy to drag it down with the Move Tool (V). The extra iris above the pupil covered the (original) pupil below. Not also the color correction work that eliminated the yellow cast in the bird’s white iris.

Digital Basics

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You can order your copy of “The Photographers’ Guide to Canon Digital Photo Professional 4.0” (aka the DPP 4 Raw Conversion eGuide) by Arash Hazeghi and Arthur Morris by clicking here.

The DPP 4 eGuide (PDF)

Learn how and why I and many other discerning photographers choose and use only DPP 4 to convert their Canon RAW files in the DPP 4 RAW Conversion Guide by Arash Hazeghi and yours truly. The latest version supports all of the newer Canon camera bodies and several older models including the EOS-7D and the EOS-1D Mark IV. The DPP IV Guide is the ideal companion to the 7D Mark II User’s Guide, a runaway best seller.

DPP 4 Kudos

From Richard Gollard via e-mail:

I have been doing tons of studying the books and PDFs that I have purchased from BIRDS AS ART. And I have to say that after reading the DPP 4 conversion guide that you did with Arash Hazeghi I tried DPP 4 and was blown away with the difference from the conversions that I made with Adobe Photoshop and Lightroom. Thanks for the consistently great information.

The DPP 4 eGuide (PDF) Updated for 1D Mark IV and the original 7D

The DPP 4 eGuide was recently updated to include the luminance and chrominance noise reduction values for both the 1D Mark IV and the original 7D. If you purchased your copy from BAA please e-mail Jim and request the DPP 4 1d IV/7D update. Please be sure to cut and paste page 1 into your e-mail as proof of purchase.


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San Diego offers a wealth of very attractive natural history subjects. With annual visits spanning more than three decades I have lot of experience there….

2015 San Diego 4 1/2-DAY BIRDS AS ART Instructional Photo-Tour (IPT) JAN 8 thru the morning of JAN 12, 2016: $1899 (Limit: 10/Openings: 3)

Meet and Greet at 7:00pm on the day before the IPT begins
Two great leaders: Arthur Morris and Denise Ippolito

Join us in San Diego to photograph the spectacular breeding plumage Brown Pelicans with their fire-engine red and olive green bill pouches; Brandt’s and Double-crested Cormorants in breeding plumage with their amazing crests; breeding plumage Wood and Ring-necked Duck; other species possible including Lesser Scaup, Redhead, and Surf Scoter; a variety of gulls including Western, California, and the gorgeous Heerman’s, all in full breeding plumage; shorebirds including Marbled Godwit, Willet, Sanderling and Black-bellied Plover; many others possible including Least, Western, and Spotted Sandpiper, Whimbrel, Black and Ruddy Turnstone, Semipalmated Plover, and Surfbird; Harbor Seals (depending on the current regulations) and California Sea Lions likely; and Bird of Paradise flowers. And as you can see by studying the two IPT cards there are some nice landscape opportunities as well.

Did I mention that there are wealth of great birds and natural history subjects in San Diego in winter?

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Though the pelicans will be the stars of the show on this IPT there will be many other handsome and captivating subjects in wonderful settings.

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14 comments to Background too busy for you?

  • avatar Carolyn Peterson

    A week in the Falklands sounds fabulous! Have a great time and I hope you get to observe and photograph some Falkland Sea Lions along with the other wildlife you are sure to enjoy. I would love to spend two weeks on the Falklands. Of course the South Georgia excursion is a sure winner. Say hello to the condors in Chile and the Kings and Elephants in SG for me.

  • avatar Gary Axten

    I like it, reminds me of those films where a single person is picked out of a crowd for surveillance.

  • I just don’t like the pelican behind the first one. The second
    one kinda gives an impression of a big booty from the first.
    The other thing I don’t like about the second pelican is its
    head intersection with the first.

    Moving backwards, I think its too busy. Maybe if you had the
    out of focus pelican on the left also on the right would’ve
    worked.

    That’s just me.

    Doug

  • avatar Elinor Osborn

    If you got lower the hump of sand or whatever in the foreground would have covered at least some of the bird’s beak.
    I think I would leave the background as is except for darkening the lightest spots in it using Tim Grey dodge and burn— Hold Option/alt and click new layer button. Choose Soft Light in Mode. Click fill with…50% gray. Choose a 0 % hardness brush larger than the white spots, with opacity in the teens, and paint with black on the white spots.

  • avatar David Policansky

    Hi, Artie. I like the background, and the image overall, but this isn’t one of your images that make me gasp in awe. You couldn’t go lower because there’s some light brown stuff in the foreground–sand? rocks?–that would have got in the way of the bird if you’d tried. I can’t answer the Photoshop question because I have no expertise. That you spent time adjusting the position of the pupil in the bird’s eye just blows my mind.

  • avatar Frank Peelee

    IMHO the background blur is just right, but the brightest areas in the BG compete with the foreground pelican. Burning those in quite a bit would improve the already-excellent image.

  • While I admire your ability to reposition the pupil on the bird it’s not something I would do. Sorry, but I consider this “forced art”. I like the real version. Just imho.

    • avatar Arthur Morris/BIRDS AS ART

      Nothing to be sorry about. You do what you do and feel comfortable with. I do the same. Do understand that this image would never be entered in a contest that prohibits digital alterations. The original eye looked way too funky for me. artie

  • I like a more blurred background to match the foreground, isolating the bird. I downloaded your photo, selected the bird and used Gaussian blur just to take out a little more detail in the background. Cannot figure out how to upload it to you so cannot post it. Will delete it so you don’t have to worry about copyright infringement.
    Peg

  • avatar Bob Allen

    Very nice image. I prefer it as-is. The fg peli is fantastic! True, the light head of the peli directly behind the fg one is a bit distracting, but that’s what it often looks like on the La Jolla cliffs.

  • Yes, too busy. You could have moved a little to the left or right, but by then the background birds probably would have moved too, so, move on to the next subject. You can’t get ’em all.

    Mike

  • avatar Maggi Fuller

    For me, the bright ‘head of the bird?’ or whatever, behind the head/beak of main subject is very distracting. I would remove and/or replace with something far more muted.

  • avatar Loren Charif

    The background is what it is; I know some folks who might be bothered by it, but I am not.

    That said, IF I were going to try to clean it up, I’d select the primary bird and put it on its own layer, then go back and work on the background and try to blur the bird immediately behind it a bit more. As an alternative, maybe try to selectively clone or use the patch tool if the blur doesn’t do it for me, although I’m not sure where I’d clone/patch from, since there is a lot going on back there.