Let’s Play BPN. On Doing Critiques. And the Two-way Benefits of Critiquing … « Arthur Morris/BIRDS AS ART

Let's Play BPN. On Doing Critiques. And the Two-way Benefits of Critiquing ...

What’s Up?

On Tuesday, I left my house early on a clear, still morning intent on doing birds. I worked a nice adult crane from my SUV at 840mm and spotted a gorgeous fresh juvenile Tricolored Heron foraging in a damp area. But the grass was too tall and I wound up zero for 50 on the handsome young heron. I did spot my first young Osprey of the season flapping its wings atop the nesting tower. It should be flying soon. The truth be told I have not been looking too hard. I worked a large white flower — White Morning Glory — on a vine and struck out there as well.

Thanks for all the birthday wishes. I forgot to mention that on Sunday past I swam 100 lengths instead of my daily 66.

Selling Your Used Photo Gear Through BIRDS AS ART

Selling your used (or like-new) photo gear through the BAA Blog is a great idea. We charge only a 5% commission. One of the more popular used gear for sale sites charged a minimum of 20%. Plus assorted fees! Yikes. They went out of business. And e-Bay fees are now up to 13%. Please understand that e-Bay prices are bogus. And the same is true of the prices of used gear including my dear friends at B&H and the other mega-outfits. They offer you pennies and then try to sell the stuff to ignorant folks for ridiculously high prices. With their huge international exposure, they occasionally find someone …

The minimum item price here is $500 (or less for a $25 fee). If you are interested please shoot us an e-mail with the words Items for Sale Info Request cut and pasted into the Subject line :). Stuff that is priced fairly — I offer pricing advice to those who agree to the terms — usually sells. With the pandemic and the down economy, the market had been somewhat depressed but sales have been brisk for the past few weeks. And over the past year, we have sold many many hundreds of items. Do know that prices the used prices of many items have been dropping steadily. The prices garnered for used Canon gear has tanked completely as demand has dropped tremendously. It is ironic that for decades Canon gear had very strong resale value … That said, the prices on used Nikon gear are dropping as well. You can see all the currrent bargains here on the Used Gear Page.

Note: all BAA Used Gear sales include insured ground shipping via UPS to lower 48 US addresses only. Others who live elsewhere are invited to e-mail the seller for shipping surcharge info. Sellers should charge you only the difference between shipping to the farthest US location from their home and the charge to a non-lower-48 address.

Very Recent Sales

Anita North sold her Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 500mm f/5.6E PF ED VR lens in excellent plus condition for a BAA record-low $3045.95 (was $3095.95) in early JUNE 2020.
Arthur Morris sold his Nikon D850 DSLR Camera (Body Only) in excellent plus to like-new condition for a BAA record-low $1,795.95 (was $1995.95) in early JUNE 2020.
Patrick Hogue sold his Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 200-500mm f/5.6E ED VR lens in excellent plus condition for $850.00 (was $896.95) and a Sony Cyber-shot DSC-RX10 IV Digital Camera in near-mint condition for a BAA record-low $998.00, both soon after being listed in late-MAY 2020.
Carol Anderson, wife of the late Walt Anderson — inventor of the Better Beamer, sold a Canon 200-400 f/4L IS USM lens with internal 1.4X Extender in excellent plus condition for $4998.00 and a Canon EOS-1DX Mark II camera body in like-new condition for $2798.00, both soon after they were listed in early June 2020.
Anita North sold her Nikon D500 DSLR in excellent plus to near-mint condition for a BAA record-low price of $895.95 in mid-June 2020.
Blog regular Fred Innamorato sold his Canon EF 400mm f/4 DO IS II lens in excellent plus condition for $3099.99, a Canon EF 300mm f /2.8L IS II USM lens in excellent plus condition for $2899.00, a Canon EF 100-400mm f /4.5-5.6L IS USM II lens in excellent plus condition for $999.00, an EOS 5D Mark IV camera body in excellent plus condition for $1549.00, a Canon EOS-1DX Mark II camera body in excellent plus condition for $2698.00, a Canon EF Extender 1.4X III (teleconverter) in excellent plus condition for $219.00, a Canon EF Extender 2X III (teleconverter) in excellent plus condition for $219.00, and a Canon Extension Tube Set, the EF 12 II and EF 25 II, in excellent plus condition for $124.90, all on the first day of listing in late-MAY 2020.

New Listing

Canon EOS-1D-X Mark II dSLR

BAA friend and skilled photographer Clemens Van der Werf is offering a Canon EOS-1D-X Mark II body in excellent plus to near-mint condition for a very low $2,795.00. The body has been well-maintained and has no scratches. Photos are available upon request. Shutter count < 85,000. The sale includes the front lens cover, the strap, the CDs, cables and manuals, the original product box, the battery with charger, and insured ground shipping through FedEx to lower 48 US addresses only. Please contact Clemens via e-mail.

The EOS-1DX Mark II is a Canon flagship professional camera body. I made many fine images with mine. It is rugged and fast and featured Canon’s best AF system (before the release of the 1dX III). The 1DX II sells new for $4,999.00 so you can save a very cool $2204.00 on this great deal.. artie

Price Drops

Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 500mm f/5.6E PF ED VR Lens

Price Reduced $255.00 on 17 JUNE 2020!

Patrick Hogue is also offering a Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 500mm f/5.6E PF ED VR lens in near-mint condition for a very low $3195.00 (was $3450.00). The sale includes the original box, the lens bag, the front and rear lens caps, and insured ground shipping via major courier to lower-48 US addresses only. Your item will not ship until your check clears unless other arrangements are made.

Please contact Patrick via e-mail or by phone at 1-760-898-6770 (Pacific time zone). .

The 500 PF was my favorite Nikon lens; I hated giving it up. It is easily handheld by most folks; It kills for flight and does well with the 1.4X teleconverter. It is still hard to find a new one. Save $757.00 and get yours soon. artie

Nikon D500 DSLR Camera w/16mm-80mm F2.8-4.0 VR Nikkor Zoom Lens

BAA Record-low Price!
Price Reduced $211.95 on 17 JUNE 2020!

Patrick Hogue is also offering a Nikon D500 DSLR Camera in excellent condition and a 16mm-80mm F2.8-4.0 VR Nikkor zoom lens in near-mint condition for a BAA record-low $985.00 (was $1,196.95). The sale includes the original box, the front body, cap, the battery charger, the strap, both caps for the lens, and insured ground shipping via major courier to lower-48 US addresses only. Your item will not ship until your check clears unless other arrangements are made.

Please contact Patrick via e-mail or by phone at 1-760-898-6770 (Pacific time zone).

The D500 is Nikon’s top-of-the-line crop factor body. It multiplies your focal length by 1.5X. Joe Przybyla and Dan Kearl, both excellent photographers on Bird Photographer’s.Net, use the D500 as their workhorse camera bodies. Joe, the co-author of The BAA Middle of Florida Photographic Site Guide, was after this old dog for a long time to try a D500. The zoom is a quality wide-angle with dozens of uses. The pair sells new for $2,593.90 so you can save a small fortune — $1,608.90 — by taking this real deal. artie

Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 600mm f/4E FL ED VR Lens

BAA Record-low Price!
Price reduced $200.00 on 5-28-20
Price reduced $100.00 on 6-13-20

Anita North is offering a Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 600mm f/4E FL ED VR lens in excellent condition for a BAA record-low $8965.95 (was $9265.95). The front element is immaculate, the finish on the hood is dinged up pretty good but is functionally perfect, and the body of the lens is excellent plus. The sale includes the lens trunk, the strap, the front cover, the rear lens cap, and insured ground shipping via major courier to lower-48 US addresses only. Your item will not ship until your check clears unless other arrangements are made.

Please contact artie via e-mail or on his cell at 863-221-2372 before 4pm Eastern time. Please leave a message or text if no answer.

In all systems, the 600 f/4 lenses are the weapons of mass destruction when it comes to birds and wildlife. I loved my Nikon 600 both alone and with the 1.4X teleconverter. If you use Nikon gear and have been dreaming of moving up to the big leagues, do get in touch with me ASAP to save $3,331.00. This lens sells new for $12,296.95. artie

Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 80-400mm f/4.5-5.6G ED VR Lens

BAA Record-low Price!
Price reduced 50.00 on 5-28-20
Price reduced 50.00 on 6-13-20

Anita North is also offering a Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 80-400mm f/4.5-5.6G ED VR lens in like-new condition for a BAA record-low $995.95 (was $1,095.95). The sale includes the original box, the lens bag, the front and rear caps, and insured ground shipping via major courier to lower-48 US addresses only. Your item will not ship until your check clears unless other arrangements are made.

Please contact artie via e-mail or on his cell at 863-221-2372 before 4pm Eastern time. Please leave a message or text if no answer.

This was my workhorse lens on the memorable Emperor Penguin trip. It is amazingly sharp and versatile. And it does well with the TC-E14 when the sun is out. As this one sells new for $2,,096.95 you can save an incredible $1,101.00 by being the first to grab Anita’s lens. artie

The Last of artie’s Nikon Gear

Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 70-200mm f/4G ED VR Lens

BAA Record-low Price!
Price reduced $50.00 on 5-28-20
Price reduced $50.00 on 6-13-20

Arthur Morris is offering a Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 70-200mm f/4G ED VR lens in like-new condition for a BAA record-low $696.95 (was $796.95). The sale includes the front and rear caps, the original box and lens bag, and insured ground shipping via major courier to lower-48 US addresses only. Your item will not ship until your check clears unless other arrangements are made.

Please contact artie via e-mail or on his cell at 863-221-2372 before 4pm Eastern time. Please leave a message or text if no answer.

This lens is smaller and lighter and costs a lot less than the f/2.8 version. It is relatively fast, very sharp, and extremely versatile. It pairs well with the TC-14E. It sells new right now for $1,396.95. Grab it now to save $700.00 artie

Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-120mm f/4 VR Lens

BAA Record-low Price!
Price reduced $50.00 on 5-28-20
Price reduced $10.00 on 5-28-20

Arthur Morris is also offering a Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-120mm f/4 VR lens in like-new condition for a BAA record-low $486.95 (was $546.95). The sale includes the front and rear caps, the original box and lens pouch, and insured ground shipping via major courier to lower-48 US addresses only. Your item will not ship until your check clears unless other arrangements are made.

Please contact artie via e-mail or on his cell at 863-221-2372 before 4pm Eastern time. Please leave a message or text if no answer.

I have always loved the lenses in this class. The Nikon version was a lot sharper than the Canon 24-105. It is a versatile multi-purpose lens with a thousand uses. I keep my SONY 24-105 on the front seat of my SUV every day and use it often. The 24-120 sells new right now for $1,096.95. Grab Artie’s pretty much new lens to save a cool $610.00! artie

94 sold to rave reviews.

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Gear Questions and Advice

Too many folks attending BAA IPTs and dozens of photographers whom I see in the field and on BPN, are–out of ignorance–using the wrong gear especially when it comes to tripods and more especially, tripod heads… Please know that I am always glad to answer your gear questions via e-mail. Those questions might deal with systems, camera bodies, accessories, and/or lens choices and decisions.

This image was created on 25 MAY 2020 from my SUV at Indian Lake Estates, FL. I used the Induro GIT 304L/FlexShooter Pro-mounted Sony FE 600mm f/4 GM OSS lens, Sony FE 1.4x teleconverter, and the blazingly fast AF King, the Sony Alpha a9 II Mirrorless Digital Camera Body. ISO 1000. Exposure determined by Zebras with ISO on the rear dial: 1/200 sec. at f/5.6 in Manual mode. AWB at 10:00am in the pouring rain.

Tracking Flexible Spot (M) AF-C was active at the moment of exposure and performed to perfection, even when shooting through the heavy rain.

Sandhill Crane adult in torrential rain

Sandhill Crane in Torrential Downpour

Aside from keeping your gear dry, the trick in heavy rain is to vary your shutter speeds in the 1/125 to 1/400 sec. range. The length of the blurred streaks will depend on how hard the rain is coming down and the distance to the subject. Once you have the right exposure be sure to try different shutter speeds. For more on shooting in the rain see the Photographing Birds in Heavy Downpours During Thunderstorms. Learn About Protecting Your Gear and the Best Shutter Speeds … blog post here.

On Doing Critiques

Many folks feel that they are not qualified to do critiques. From where I sit, nothing could be further from the truth. Take a good look at an image. What do you like about it? What don’t you like? What are the strengths and weaknesses? Can you think of how the image could have been improved in the field? At the computer? If there is nothing good about an image, do your best to come up with at least one positive. A good critique does not require at least one suggestion for improvement or one negative. Try to be both honest and gentle. Write it all down and you have a great and honest critique.

Let’s Play BPN

Whether you have done hundreds of critiques or have never done one in your life, I ask that you write a short critique of today’s featured image and post it as a comment.

The Two-way Benefits of Critiquing

Aside from attending a BIRDS AS ART Instructional Photo-Tour (IPT), having your images critiqued is the single best way to improve your photography. And critiquing others’ images can be equally powerful. As a co-founder and now sole owner of BirdPhotographer’s.Net (BPN), I have posted 1,350 images to be critiqued by others. And I have done roughly 30,592 critiques. To this day — nearly 36 years after I began photographing birds, when I post an image, I learn something. Doubt me? After you have written and posted your critique of today’s featured image, click here to see what the folks on BPN had to say about it.

I urge you to follow the BPN link above as there is a ton to learn at every thread. And be sure to tool around both Avian and the other great BPN forums.

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8 comments to Let’s Play BPN. On Doing Critiques. And the Two-way Benefits of Critiquing …

  • avatar Dave Kettles

    Beautiful image Artie. Few days late, but just came across this.
    SO much good, and the atmosphere the rain creates with the streaked droplets really highlights beautifully why one should keep on shooting in a cloud burst…
    You asked for a critique so here goes.
    1. Exposure: to me the whites behind the eye seem a little blown, and the legs a little grey, with no apparent ‘black black’. Suggests that this may look marginally better if the exposure dropped just a little, and particular slight change in black point may bring out a bit more contrast on the breast as well, whilst improving the legs. I am sure there is some detail in the whites behind the eye that you could extract.
    2. I long for a tiny bit more grass below those feet as they disappear into the grass.
    3. My personal preference in an image like this is for a slight vignette, which to me really helps to isolate the subject, but must be v subtle.
    D

  • avatar Elinor Osborn

    The heavy rain makes this image for me because I can see the rain trails and rarely does one see an image made in heavy rain. The colors are right on and the green grass and red crown on the crane are almost opposite colors making the red stand out. Excellent exposure with some detail in the white. I tried the RAW filter and took the highlights down a bit more and added a bit of texture which gave just a bit more detail on the bird’s back and head. I like the head angle; and you left room for the hidden feet. The drops of water on the bill tip and feather tips are perfect. The whole crane, right back to the tail tip, is sharp and stands out from the lovely blurry background. Composition–the bird has plenty of room to look to its left. I’m just waiting to see the bird give its feathers a shake.

  • avatar Nagi

    Overall, a very pleasing photo – composition, use of slow shutter to show rain drops falling, etc. I would have liked to see a bit more sharpness on the face, especially the eye.

  • avatar Craig Elson

    Lots to like in this image Artie: composition, head angle, great rain streaks from using the “right” shutter speed, sharpness and feather detail, and, of course, the droplet at the end of the bill is perfect. Some thoughts: maybe a little bit more below the feet? might soften and feather the BG a bit with some more blur to smooth the tonal transitions; maybe a bit more contrast…not sure on this, I could go either way, the mood might not support it; upper left corner could be cropped slightly or I would dodge it a little.

  • avatar Melvin Grey

    Artie,
    Great ‘atmospheric’ image with raindrops very well shown against the o.o.f. multi-toned back-ground. Being from the U.K., I know just how he/she feels, I love the water drop on the end of the perfectly angled beak! My only query is – what is the enlargement on the right-hand leg at what appears to be the same distance below the left-hand knee?

    • avatar Arthur Morris/BIRDS AS ART

      Hi Melvin, I am not sure what that is. It looks like some sort of (possibly healded) injury. The next time that I see them I will check out the legs of the two adults …

      a

  • avatar Adam

    Many things to like including the subject, composition, background, perfect capture of the rain. Perhaps the head could have been angled a bit more. I might consider shifting the yellows’ hue a bit as they are frequently a component of the greens and tend to create a cast. Using a mask or local adjustment pulling down on some highlights on the back of the Sandy as well as warming the bird up somewhat and perhaps adding a bit of contrast and a vignette to make him/her pop?

  • avatar Maggi Fuller

    Nothing to critique, wonderful image…. Maybe if the head had been angled more towards you, but I’m really just being unnecessarily picky!

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