For Your Critique: Image #16 « Arthur Morris/BIRDS AS ART

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This image was created with the tripod-mounted Canon 800mm f/5.6L IS lens, the 1.4X III TC, and the EOS-1D Mark IV. ISO 800. Evaluative metering +2/3 stop: 1/60 sec. at f/8 in Av mode.

Central Sensor (by necessity) Rear Focus/AI Servo AF on the cub’s face and recompose. Click here if you missed the Rear Focus Tutorial.

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For Your Critique: Image #16

The image above of a Coastal Brown Bear cub kissing mom was created at Katmai National Park, AK on a Bear Boat IPT. It is presented for your critique; feel free to praise it or rip it to shreds. Would you keep it or delete it? Let us know why either way, what you like or what you hate. What would you have done differently?

Over the course of the next few weeks I will present four additional images in this series for a total of twenty in all. The last will be followed by several revelations including two major ones.

One of the very best ways to grow as a photographer is to look at as many good images as possible. I do that often in books, by checking out contest result web sites, by critiquing images on Bird Photographers.Net (BPN), by visiting the web sites of the world’s best photographers, and during image critiques and by encouraging image sharing on our BAA Instructional Photo-Tours (IPTs).

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The KATMAI BEAR BOAT IPT: July 24-31, 2012 from Kodiak, AK: $6499. Limit 8/Openings 5. Coastal Brown Bears (Grizzlies) Galore!

Do consider joining me next summer for a surreal experience: creating intimate photographs of these incredible bears. Coastal Brown Bears at point blank range foraging & clamming with a good chance of copulations; cubs nursing and playing. Likely additional subjects include Horned and Tufted Puffins, nesting Bald Eagle and Black-legged Kittiwake, Steller’s Sea Lion, rafts of Sea Otters and more. Halibut fishing optional.

Click here for complete details on this amazing trip.

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Shopper’s Guide

Below is a list of the gear used to create the images in today’s blog post. Thanks a stack to all who have used the Shopper’s Guide links to purchase their gear as a thank you for all the free information that we bring you on the Blog and in the Bulletins. Before you purchase anything be sure to check out the advice in our Shopper’s Guide.

Canon 800mm f/5.L IS lens. Right now this is my all time favorite super-telephoto lens.
Canon 1.4X III Teleconverter. Designed to work best with the new Series II super-telephoto lenses.
Canon EOS-1D Mark IV professional digital camera body. My two Mark IVs are my workhorse digital camera bodies.

And from the BAA On-line Store:

LensCoats. I have a LensCoat on each of my big lenses to protect them from nicks and thus increase their re-sales value. All my big lens LensCoat stuff is in Hardwood Snow pattern.
LegCoat Tripod Leg Covers. I have four tripods active and each has a Hardwood Snow LegCoat on it to help prevent further damage to my tender shoulders đŸ™‚
Gitzo GT3530LS Tripod. This one will last you a lifetime.
Mongoose M3.6 Tripod Head. Right now this is the best tripod head around for use with lenses that weigh less than 9 pounds. For heavier lenses, check out the Wimberley V2 head.
CR-80 Replacement Foot for Canon 800. When using the 800 on a Mongoose as I do, replacing the lens foot with this accessory lets the lens sit like a dog whether pointed up or down and prevents wind-blown spinning of your lens on breezy days by centering the lens directly over the tripod.
Double Bubble Level. You will find one in my camera’s hot shoe whenever I am not using flash.
Be sure to check out our camera body User’s Guides here.
The Lens Align Mark II. I use the Lens Align Mark II pretty much religiously to micro-adjust all of my gear an average of once a month and always before a major trip. Enjoy our free comprehensive tutorial here.
Canon EOS-1D Mark IV User’s Guide. Learn to use your Mark IV the way that I use mine. Also available for the 7D and the Mark III here.

10 comments to For Your Critique: Image #16

  • avatar cheapo

    It’s a super duper image! The interaction between them is lovely. But is there some over exposure, the whole thing seems slightly washed out.

  • avatar Bill Griswold

    Superb composition. I like it that the bears are paying attention to each other, as it strengthens the composition. I would increase the saturation and maybe the contrast a little, and like DP I’d consider darkening it a little after assessing the saturation and contrast. A little vignetting might be nice to manage the brightness of the large grassy areas at the top of the image. This image might do really well as a black & white, if the saturation adjustments didn’t succeed in making the colors an important part of the image.

  • avatar Ely Teehankee

    I like the picture very much. The sharpness and tons of details is very much like my ideal picture. It is bright enough to see all the details without any eye strain. I would have moved Mama bear a little bit to the right to lessen the empty looking space. This is a picture that I would definitely like to keep.

  • avatar Ted Willcox

    Neat interaction between the cub and momma bear. I would move the subjects a tad to the right putting the momma bears face in the center. I believe it would look more balanced that way. A keeper for sure.

  • avatar Mary Stamper

    Wonderful image! It captures a really delightful moment, rather than just being a “picture of a thing”. We need more of these types of images!

  • avatar Dennis Pritchett

    I like the image as is, but if I were editing this on my PC, I think I would have darkened it a tad or two.

    Dennis

  • avatar Gerald Kelberg

    The “A” shape made by the two bears in this composition is a real winner for me – like it very much – takes the eye straight to the two faces of the mom and cub. Enough off-center to work. Lots of lovely fur texture. Ideally, I would like to see a little more of Mom’s eye. But the gentle touching and warm interaction puts this in the upper stratosphere for me.

  • Great image evokes the cubs love and dependence on his mother, I would keep it.

    Jim

  • avatar harvey tabin

    Funny, I would keep it. But from what I have seen of your work, it is just another nice picture.

  • avatar Jay

    I like the image. Nice composition (though I keep thinking I want to shift the bears slightly to the right so that the empty space between them is a little more centered – it would change the balance you set up with about equi-distance between the backs of both bears and edges of the image and might not work out). Looking at the image I do want to bring out more of the colors though (not sure of the right way to describe it).